Great work. Nice picture spot and rework. Good choice of colors.
All the lights are coming from the right direction. The framing and choice of position is good. Colors are nicely enhanced with a bit of white burning just like in real life when you look at white paint reflecting light, without burning all the whites (especially in the bottom right corner).
I would personally have avoided the ray of light on the left side of the chiminea. I find it tends to erase the effect of light on the right side of the left window frame and seems a bit too artificial.
All the lights are coming from the right direction. The framing and choice of position is good. Colors are nicely enhanced with a bit of white burning just like in real life when you look at white paint reflecting light, without burning all the whites (especially in the bottom right corner).
I would personally have avoided the ray of light on the left side of the chiminea. I find it tends to erase the effect of light on the right side of the left window frame and seems a bit too artificial.
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